Wednesday, December 8, 2010

Quiddage

Wowww Quiddage was so fun. Especially the with room 11 and room 12. The buisnees in are class were Pool Stars, Sling Shot Mania, Fizzers, Smotheizzzz, Manifencet Muffins, L@ Soupers and Magnets.

I have really cool jobs like Sports resoucre guy, Tc's PA and Time Keeper. There was people everywhere running to get to the yummysiet store.

There were heaps of stores in room 12 Its was awesome!!!

I have had fun doing Quiddage and I take out about 150 snidges out every friday. Because I have lots of money.

Sunday, November 28, 2010

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

my speech

Speeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:

* Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately

* Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic:


Self Assessment from video

Speech in front of class

Success Criteria:

Speech Writing

My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced

yes

yes

The point I was making was easy to understand

yes

yes

My speech contained research

no

no

My speech had voice and was interesting

yes

yes

My speech was in my words

yes

yes

My big idea comes through strongly

yes

yes

Presentation

I enunciated my words clearly

yes

yes

Terminal consonants


Ts and ds in the middles of words


Swallowed my goobies first


Seperated my words


My voice was loud enough

yes

yes

I learnt my speech off by heart

yes

1/2

I used expression in my voice

no

yes

I used enough volume to be heard by all

yes

Yes

I used eye-contact

yes

1/2

My speech was not too fast, not too slow

yes

yes

My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes

yes

no

My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words

yes

yes

Total:

13

11

Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video

Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Sunday, October 17, 2010

Monday, October 11, 2010

i got 98 percent i think i did well but i would like to get 100 percent


what did I do well? to listen without getting distracted
what did i learn? to listen and get on with my work and not getting distracted
what is my next learning step? to get on with my work and finish quickly

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

what did i learn? what 4/5 is what did i learn? to video
what did i do well? to get 4/5 right what did i do well? to get the answer right
what will i do better next time? what will i do better next time? to have a
to have a different equation different equation.


what did i learn? to video
what did i do well? to get the question right
what will i do better next time? to have a different equation

Tuesday, September 14, 2010




















what did i learn? to describe
what did i do well? to do good writing
what will i do better next time? to describe more

Sunday, September 12, 2010

what did i learn? to do different shading
what did i do well? coloring in bold
what should i do better next time? to do more pictures

Thursday, September 9, 2010


i think i did well because i got 13 yrs and i have got better at my spelling

Sunday, September 5, 2010

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

maths test




















what did I learn? to get a better score.
what did I do well? to pass the school standards
what will i do better next time? to get 100%

maths test 2




















what did I learn? to get a better score
what did I do well? to get 100%
what will do better next time? to be faster

maths test 3




















what did I learn? to get a good score.
what did I do well? getting 100%
what will i do better next time? to finish faster

Thursday, August 19, 2010

Tuesday, August 10, 2010

Self assessments for Self assessment

My self assessments are improving because at the start of the year all I would say is that was good. But now I am deep thinking into my work by thinking and being specific.

Thursday, August 5, 2010

Tuesday, July 27, 2010

my goal














my 3 strategies to be a better listener are:
To focus
To not get distracted
To not day dream

Wednesday, June 23, 2010

Tuesday, June 22, 2010

my writing




















what did I learn? to describe with voice.
what did I do well? to describe.
what is my next learning step? to have alliteration.

my best handwriting

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I chose this visual lang piece because I put my personality into it and it is colourful.

Monday, June 21, 2010

Thursday, June 3, 2010

x cross country








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what did I learn? to make a time table.
what did I do well? to run faster than i did before.
what will I do better next time? to get 6 laps.

Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Monday, May 24, 2010

natures forces Glogster

http://qzealand.edu.glogster.com/volcanos/

What did I learn? To make a interesting Glogster page.
What did I do well? To get practitioner on my assessment.
What will I do better next time? to be a expert

Tuesday, May 11, 2010

knowledge test




















what did I learn? how to do reminders.
what did I do well? to get a better percent.
what will I do better next time? to get 80%

Thursday, May 6, 2010

My feedback

That was a totally impressive PI. Your speech was really clear and easy to understand. You had good humour. Your planning and preparation were thorough. I really enjoyed it. It gave me the feeling that I get after watching a really good movie. Great work, Corbin. I'm not convinced about eating chocolate with broccoli though. TC
Great job Corby!!! We loved how you put humor into your P.I, It was a great movie, wonder what your next dish is masterchef! Great work! Britt, Kel and Nat
funny.you spoke clearly,it was easy to under stand and was really iteresting . aidan,thomas
great job we think it was awsome and funny I would of gave the chocolate a 100 harry chaz
Very interesting Corbin, I might try that at my house. Sounds unusual but tasty! Ollie, Alan
Great PI Corbin the chocolate broccili looked nice. But next time tell us a bit more info about what you put in the dip. Lucy and Grace
Great, Great, GREAT PI Corbin, awesome presentation and Ideas and everything but you could make it a bit more interactive, but Cool PI!!:) Maddy and Zia
what did i learn? that lots of people liked my choclate broccli
what did I do well? that everyone liked my P.I.
what well I better next time? to do a better P.I.

It was really cool the video was funny how you did choc sauce and how you made it master cheif riverdale school. great P.I. corbin well done!!!!!!!! Caleb Hadley
great pi Corby great choice your brocollie would probably tast nice with cheese sauce Sophie,Sara,Hannah
Awsome PI Corban mmmmmmmm that chocolate looks nice and it looks like you put alot of effort into it so congrats corbie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kale, caelum and mike
your pi was AWESOME. you spoke very clearly good work emma and natalya
Wow that was so funny and the idea of have master chef Riverdale school was incredable and we've got to try the chocolate brocclie Kate and Libby
i think you did well in your title and amazing food.I think it was very funny how you chocoalte on your brockally Alana & Linda

what did I learn? to make a video
what did I do well? to make the audience happy
what is my next learning step? to try and do a even better P.I

Tuesday, May 4, 2010

The crazy snapper

Splash!!I was at lake Taupo. I jumped onto the boat Rummm! The fast furious falcon 3000 was white and orange.Hi I'm Corbin, and this is my dad George.
Everyone that past us said '' nice ride man''.We went about 200 metres out in the water. Fling!I threw my
line out. About 10 minutes later Whoaaa I think I got a fish. We'll don't just sit there reel it in!
So I was reeling so hard it felt like pulling a 50,000 pound truck!''cmon we want tea''.''Ok settle
down I will only get it if you cheer me on''!''Yay go Corbin! 1 2 3 pull! its a snapper BOOF!! It smacked me in the face with it's tail. Around 10 seconds later my dad said ''Knockout''!
The crazy fish was flipping like a headless chicken But luckily Dad put a net on it so it couldn't
jump back in the water.I lifted my head and the fish is having baby fishes.''Quick we will carefully put a wet towel on that big orange snapper.''She has ten fishes''! Quick carefully put them in the water.''Yep Go Go Go''.We softly put those cute small orange baby snappers in the water and finally the new mum went softly in the with her new baby snappers.''I wanted tea''.Said dad.''Lets just go and have some fish and chips''!''Okkkk''. That was the best fishing day ever!

Sunday, April 25, 2010

Thursday, April 22, 2010

homefun score

97%
what did I learn? to be responsible during SDL and doing work at home.
what did I do well? to get 90% and more.
what will I do better next time? to get 100%

Sunday, April 18, 2010

Term 1 Goal

what did I learn? to speak up in big audiences.
what did I do well? I would speak more often
what will I do better next time? to speak clearly

Monday, March 29, 2010

wordle

visual lang




















what did I learn? to make my border relate to the topic
what did I do well? my border relate to the topic
what is my next learning step? very little white

Wednesday, March 24, 2010

Monday, March 22, 2010

corbin bank account

corbin's bank account
what did I learn? how to put my bank account on blogger.
what did I do well? not getting angry if it didn't work
what would I do better next time? trying to get my bank account on faster

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

basic facts




















what did I learn? that now I know what 17 minus 9 is
what did I do well? getting 98%
what will I do better next time? to get 100%

basic facts




















what did I learn? that 3 times 7 equals 21
what did I do well? that I got more than 80%
what will I do better next time? try to get 100%

maths test




















what did I learn? that 7 divided by 7 equals 1
what did I do well? that I got 100%
what will I do better next time? write neater



















what did I learn? that I had to get 80 % or more
what did I do well? getting 98%
what will I do better next time? I will try to get 100%

Thursday, February 25, 2010

Sunday, February 21, 2010

my goal






















what did I learn? to be brave
what did I do well? to achieve my goal
What is my next learning step? to have a different goal

knowledge test




















what did I learn? hundredths in 360
what did I do well? getting 66 percent
what should I do better next time? get to stage 7

Wednesday, February 17, 2010




















what did I do well?
my picture related to the topic
what did I learn?
BIG BOLD colors
what would I do better next time?
very little white

Tuesday, February 16, 2010

what did I learn? how to throw the further
what did I do well?throwing the ball
what will I do better next time? throw better next time

Wednesday, February 10, 2010