Perhaps you shouldn't have done such a brilliant investigation in the first term, because you haven't been able to match it since. Reading from a powerpoint is not a good option and especially lots of words written by someone else. It's a pity your movie didn't work, but I would have thought you'd have learnt from last time to check it first. I'm having real difficulty thinking of something positive to say about this.
Interesting pi corby and egg! brilliant presentation! mabey you should have tested before you did your pi.
ReplyDeletegood pi you konk what you are talking about.you guys spoke clearly and loudly.you could have had
ReplyDeletesome more exprison Harry Aidan and chaz
Cool pi Corbin you collected good info. You Ned to work on making the information sound like it's in your own words Alan Hadley britt
ReplyDeletePerhaps you shouldn't have done such a brilliant investigation in the first term, because you haven't been able to match it since. Reading from a powerpoint is not a good option and especially lots of words written by someone else. It's a pity your movie didn't work, but I would have thought you'd have learnt from last time to check it first. I'm having real difficulty thinking of something positive to say about this.
ReplyDeleteThat was a good pi egg we liked it how you had good information but next time you could be more organised and write all of it into your own words.
ReplyDeletenat and kelly.
Good job!
ReplyDeleteIt was really interesting but you should have done it in your own words and made sure that the video works.
Other than that great job!
By Madi
great job you had alot of info on sqaush. Next time you should be more organised and look at the audience.
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Cool PI you had a lot of info but next time talk louder and write it in you own words but a part from that good PI
ReplyDeleteBy Luce :)
Cool PI. You needed to talk louder and put it in your own words. But you spoke clearly but not loud enough.
ReplyDeletecool pi but maybe next time speeck up
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