cool PI Corbin you did well and it was very very entertaining but you could improve on speaking more clearly cause you had some muck ups but other than that congrats Corbin
Entertaining, Corbin. The audience clearly enjoyed your movie. Next time I would like to see a bit more depth of research and thinking from you to go with the entertaining aspect which you do so well.
Great PI Corbin! The part in the middle was funny! You had good questions that some of the contestants didnt know.You spoke clear and loud and it was a very impressive PI! Next time: sit in a place with no sun shining in on you, but apart from that it was awesome! cant wait to see what is next! Britt and Sara =)
WOW! Cool P.I Corbin you did very well. You always do something like a game show! You did well by speaking very well and clearly. But next time could you make it a little bit shorter. Kate and Libby ;)
Cool PI Corbin it was very funny and had alot of questions what made it cool to watch but next time inter duse the people a bit more and say more at the end not just I think I did well but a part from that great job
Natalya and Alana: great PI and I liked the movie it was awesome but find a place were the light won't hit your players face so we can see there faces better
Great PI Corbin! Next time you need to speak a bit clearer but otherwise you did really well. You chose a good topic and it certainly entertained your audience. [They were hard questions]
Emma- well done Corbin what you did well? you put lots of effort into it. what did i learn? that Mr mcaullum has two children. what will you do better next time? maybe do the movie in a proper studio.
That was a very humorous PI corbin.You put lots of effort into yor PI.You spoke very clearly and you kept the audiance intertained throughout the whole PI. Next time you could speak a little clearer because you kind of mumbled.Next time you could do the PI somewhere else because the sun was in your face and we thought that the sun was distracting you.Well done corby!!!
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ReplyDeleteawsome pi corbin!! HaHa HaHa! very funny mistake there in the middile!
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ReplyDeletecool PI Corbin you did well and it was very very entertaining but you could improve on speaking
ReplyDeletemore clearly cause you had some muck ups but other than that congrats Corbin
you did good because you made us laugh.you created succesful pi.yoou need to work on speaking more clearly. ALAN CALEB KENNEDY
ReplyDeleteNatalya and Alana: great PI and I liked the movie it was awesome but... ... don't change anything
ReplyDeletegreat pi it was very entertaining and intresting. but next time look at the audience when you speak.
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Entertaining, Corbin. The audience clearly enjoyed your movie. Next time I would like to see a bit more depth of research and thinking from you to go with the entertaining aspect which you do so well.
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ReplyDeleteGreat PI Corbin!
ReplyDeleteThe part in the middle was funny! You had good questions that some of the contestants didnt know.You spoke clear and loud and it was a very impressive PI!
Next time: sit in a place with no sun shining in on you, but apart from that it was awesome! cant wait to see what is next!
Britt and Sara =)
WOW! Cool P.I Corbin you did very well. You always do something like a game show! You did well by speaking very well and clearly.
ReplyDeleteBut next time could you make it a little bit shorter. Kate and Libby ;)
cool P.I Corbin and I liked it.It was funny and fun and good setting your P.I up
ReplyDeleteawsome pi corby! HaHa HaHa very funny and entertaning
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ReplyDeleteCool PI Corbin it was very funny and had alot of questions what made it cool to watch but next time inter duse the people a bit more and say more at the end not just I think I did well but a part from that great job
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Natalya and Alana: great PI and I liked the movie it was awesome but find a place were the light won't hit your players face so we can see there faces better
ReplyDeleteGreat PI Corbin! Next time you need to speak a bit clearer but otherwise you did really well. You chose a good topic and it certainly entertained your audience. [They were hard questions]
ReplyDeletecool pi it was very good but maybe next time don't mess up
ReplyDeleteawesome pi corby! very funny and entertaning. next time get it right and have no mistakes but other than that well done!
ReplyDeleteEmma- well done Corbin
ReplyDeletewhat you did well? you put lots of effort into it.
what did i learn? that Mr mcaullum has two children.
what will you do better next time? maybe do the movie in a proper studio.
That was a very humorous PI corbin.You put lots of effort into yor PI.You spoke very clearly and you kept the audiance intertained throughout the whole PI. Next time you could speak a little clearer because you kind of mumbled.Next time you could do the PI somewhere else because the sun was in your face and we thought that the sun was distracting you.Well done corby!!!
ReplyDeletecool pi i liked how you keeped the mistake but next time dont have any mistakes .good pi
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