My feedback

That was a totally impressive PI. Your speech was really clear and easy to understand. You had good humour. Your planning and preparation were thorough. I really enjoyed it. It gave me the feeling that I get after watching a really good movie. Great work, Corbin. I'm not convinced about eating chocolate with broccoli though. TC
Great job Corby!!! We loved how you put humor into your P.I, It was a great movie, wonder what your next dish is masterchef! Great work! Britt, Kel and Nat
funny.you spoke clearly,it was easy to under stand and was really iteresting . aidan,thomas
great job we think it was awsome and funny I would of gave the chocolate a 100 harry chaz
Very interesting Corbin, I might try that at my house. Sounds unusual but tasty! Ollie, Alan
Great PI Corbin the chocolate broccili looked nice. But next time tell us a bit more info about what you put in the dip. Lucy and Grace
Great, Great, GREAT PI Corbin, awesome presentation and Ideas and everything but you could make it a bit more interactive, but Cool PI!!:) Maddy and Zia
what did i learn? that lots of people liked my choclate broccli
what did I do well? that everyone liked my P.I.
what well I better next time? to do a better P.I.

It was really cool the video was funny how you did choc sauce and how you made it master cheif riverdale school. great P.I. corbin well done!!!!!!!! Caleb Hadley
great pi Corby great choice your brocollie would probably tast nice with cheese sauce Sophie,Sara,Hannah
Awsome PI Corban mmmmmmmm that chocolate looks nice and it looks like you put alot of effort into it so congrats corbie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kale, caelum and mike
your pi was AWESOME. you spoke very clearly good work emma and natalya
Wow that was so funny and the idea of have master chef Riverdale school was incredable and we've got to try the chocolate brocclie Kate and Libby
i think you did well in your title and amazing food.I think it was very funny how you chocoalte on your brockally Alana & Linda

what did I learn? to make a video
what did I do well? to make the audience happy
what is my next learning step? to try and do a even better P.I